my first review

a first review for any of my novels, for which i’m eternally grateful.

i told my kid that my first review wasn’t exactly a rave, and she fussed at me for always saying and doing things that make people look at me funny, and how i should mend my ways and try to be less crazy.  but jim and i are quite pleased at this review.  sorry for any scarring, tho.

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Train Wreck Indeed

EditorFiona
January 20, 2010

Oh my.

This is . . . .different.

It all starts with phone calls from Mom to each of her adult offspring; a pothead, a ruthless businessman, a disturbed socialite, and a drug dealer. Apparently she’s saying horrible things to them and clearly it’s her cruelty that warped their lives.

But on the next page, the story’s told again from Mom’s point of view, and it turns out she was reminiscing lovingly about their childhoods and missing them and was really saying something quite different, but they weren’t listening, just hearing what they thought. The pathos of this almost made me cry.

However the fuzzy moment and sympathy for Mom is short-lived. Soon it becomes clear that everyone in this story is batshit crazy. It’s all so over the top, you soon realize you’re not expected to suspend disbelief. It’s a parody of the most dysfunctional family you can imagine. There’s also strippers, thugs, domestic abuse, roasted pets, scads and scads of drug abuse, infidelity, extortion, kinks you’d rather not know about, and of course at least three murder plots against Mom.

So, although there are no actual trains in it; Train Wreck is a good title to describe my reaction to this story. It was definitely not my cup of tea, but the horror of it was somewhat hypnotic. It’s not a serious story, so it must be meant as humour, but I did not find it funny at all. It’s rather hard to rate, because it’s so much not to my taste, and I know it’s not great literature, yet I will allow that it takes a certain quality of imagination and creativity (disturbed!) to dream up something like this.

Three stars “worth a look” seems right to me. Worth a look if this sort of thing is up your alley; otherwise don’t risk the mental scarring.  If you enjoyed the movie “American Beauty”, this is not unlike it in word form.

A clever touch is the use of links as illustrations.

this is a work of transgressive fiction, and as such, it’s all about the bad side of people.  i mean, not that any of us are bad, really, just stupid and misguided.  but we have bad attitudes, and we make bad mistakes, and we do bad things.  that’s how i put it to my 2.5 year old grandson, anyway.

and here’s a grand blurb, taken from the review.  yes, you can say i’m pleased.  thanks, fiona, wherever you are.

The pathos of this almost made me cry…everyone in this story is batshit crazy. It’s all so over the top, you soon realize you’re not expected to suspend disbelief. It’s a parody of the most dysfunctional family you can imagine…the horror of it was somewhat hypnotic. It’s not a serious story, so it must be meant as humour, but I did not find it funny at all…it takes a certain quality of imagination and creativity (disturbed!) to dream up something like this…Worth a look if this sort of thing is up your alley; otherwise don’t risk the mental scarring.  If you enjoyed the movie “American Beauty”, this is not unlike it in word form.

she said american beauty.  yeah.  can you see producing this, kevin spacey?

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